Let's Deal the Writing TAKS a Knock out punch

Let\'s Deal the Writing TAKS a Knock out punch

2/25/2011

Thats' right! We will be writing from the heart and using all our strategies such as entertaining beginnings, 5 fully developed paragraphs with elaboration techniques interspersed throughout our stories. A simile here, onomatopeia there , a sprinkle of dialogue, a dollop of hyperbole, a cartful of verbs and adverbs, and just a tad bit of humor. When we get done with the wow effects, we will scour through that paper with A CUP full of revise and edit strategies. Finally, we'll wrap it all up with an unforgettable ending, and Austin ladies the Fourth Grade Eagles and Armadillos are going to Rock Your World!!.
Let's Go Aces!

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84 Comments

Melissa T.

2/25/2011 08:20:00 am

ROCK THE TAKS EVERYONE!!!!!!!

Melissa T

2/25/2011 08:24:03 am

Punch it hard but no blood right???

alena

2/25/2011 09:08:25 am

Mrs.Andega, remember the promise you made(die her hair turquoise). rock the taks and kick it up a notch.

Tremina Lockett

2/25/2011 11:26:17 am

We are going to do our very best om the REAL writing taks test roght everyone? Blog if you agree.

Braelyn

2/26/2011 12:03:20 am

Make Sure you use CUPS,Identify the revise and edit sentences,Identify the senteces that need revision,Do your best, and Rock the test!

Tremina

2/26/2011 12:33:42 am

I meant to say right.

Christian R

2/26/2011 10:07:59 am

RIMEMDER 4A&4B TO USE CUPS, HIGHLIGTH IMPORTANT INFORMTION, REVISE&EDIT YOUR STORYS', EXPLOED THE MOMENT,READ CAREFLY!!

Christian R

2/26/2011 10:16:40 am

I MEAN TO REMEMBER,INFORMATION,AND EXPLODE!

isabella cheese

2/27/2011 01:16:39 am

1.use good hand writing
2.use good elaboration
3.make along story
4.dont be redundent
5.don'thave fragments
6.check with cups

Richard

2/27/2011 01:38:18 am

1.UNWRAP
2.PIRATE
3.CUPS
4.Revise and edit
5.Explode the Moment

Richard

2/27/2011 01:56:46 am

Sorry about the stratagies I just left. Here they are in sentences.One stratagie is UNWRAP. Some other stratagies are CUPS, Explode the moment, PIRATE, and revise and edit.

mykala

2/27/2011 08:35:51 am

Richard what does pirate mean. And come on guys if you want Mrs.Andega to do something completely humiliating.But if you dont try your best you will not get a big reward.you have to rock the mock taks test

Mykala

2/27/2011 08:38:24 am

Ooops I ment to say the real taks test.

Mykala

2/27/2011 08:45:42 am

1.use cups
2.check over your work
3.make sure you are looking carefully
4.revise carefully
5.do not make redundant sentences
6.make complete sentences
7.make complete paragraphs

landin boyd

2/27/2011 09:04:07 am

If your doing a writing story you have to have CAPS, spelling, grammer, punctuation marks, and periods and you shoukd always capitalize the beggining of a sentence and names.

christian boyd

2/27/2011 09:09:35 am

capitalize the beggining of a sentence names , places. End with periods or question marks. If you are making a list use commas. And you correct spelling and grammer.

Jordan

2/27/2011 09:57:07 am

1.CUPS
2.Don`t time travel
3.use commas on conjunctions and lists
4.capitalize begggining off sentences, titles and propernouns
5.end sentences with periods, questions marks and exclamation points.?!.?!

Jordan

2/27/2011 10:01:23 am

Don`t rush through and EXPLODE THAT MOMENT!!!

Camryn (Jordan`s sister)

2/27/2011 10:03:33 am

I know you can do it!!!!!

Christian H.

2/27/2011 11:06:22 am

1.Use cups.
2.Make complete sentances.
3.Don't be redundent.
4.Don't time travel.
5.Don't doubt yourself.

Christian H.

2/27/2011 11:09:18 am

I promise to make Mrs. Andega proud.

Amir

2/27/2011 11:17:38 am

1.cups
2.don't rush.
3.Explode the moment
4.check over your work
5.don't give up

alec

2/27/2011 09:25:41 pm

1.explode the moment
2.focus
3.have an enteresting beginning
4.use proper gramer
5.ROCK THE TAKS!!!!

zarya

2/28/2011 05:58:27 am

1.take your time and don't rush.2.read your story word by word.3.make a idea web to hold your thoughts in.4.use CUPS very carefully.5.GET A FOUR!

Faith

2/28/2011 05:58:58 am

1.Correct gammer
2.Spelling
3.Punation
4.Enteresting beginning
5.Explode the moment

Tolulola

2/28/2011 06:13:54 am

1.Cups
2.Unwrap
3.Juicy Jots
4.Entertaining Beginning
5.Explode the Moment
6. GET A 4!!!!

max

2/28/2011 06:20:42 am

cups
unwrap
juicy jots
capatalize
get a 4

Tolulola

2/28/2011 06:24:52 am

oops i ment
Use Cups
Unwrap
Use Juicy Jots
An Entetaining Beginning
Explode the Moment
Get a 4!!!!

mallory

2/28/2011 06:45:06 am

Everyone can do it, if think you can and you'll be able to. YOUR MIND IS A POWERFULL THING

melissa p

2/28/2011 07:00:20 am

1.ues cups
2. have a good sleep
3.eat good
4.ues your mind
5rock the task

Trieu Tran

2/28/2011 07:04:06 am

Trieu

2/28/2011 07:05:54 am

1. Use CUPS
2. Focus
3. Eat an good breakfast
4. Don't rush it, take your time
5. EXPLODE THE MONMENT!!

Melissa

2/28/2011 07:40:52 am

Melissa T

2/28/2011 07:47:06 am

1. CUPS
2. Stay in TOPIC
3. Spelling
4. Idea Web
5. Rock the Austin Ladies WORLD!!!
=-]

Melissa T.

2/28/2011 07:49:14 am

and maybe do better then that.... ;-)

Sydni

2/28/2011 08:05:00 am

1. use cups
2. circle info
3. cheek your work
4.use straggtys
5. try your best!!!!!!!!

Matthew

2/28/2011 08:09:19 am

Use C.U.P.S.,stay on topic,read over your story for mistakes,make an idea web,leave the Austin ladies with chocolate that has a smooth ending.

Matthew

2/28/2011 08:13:32 am

We can pass the TAKS test 4th grade.

crystal

2/28/2011 08:19:52 am

you must use cups tomorrow on the real taks i mean toss test i think. Mrs.Andega i have decided to promise you that i am going to Knock yhe toss out of the ball park

crystal

2/28/2011 08:23:57 am

and ya richard what does pirate mean

DAISY

2/28/2011 08:33:11 am

I'm gonna use these 5 strategies:

DAISY

2/28/2011 08:35:51 am

1.Use cups 2.Don't rush 3.Spelling 4.Look back 5.Do your best!

Analisa

2/28/2011 08:44:39 am

1.cups
2.unwrap
3.don't rush it is not the end of the world.
4.check your work
5.Get the Austin ladies to send your test to the govement so he or she can read it.

Alec

2/28/2011 08:52:20 am

1)Use correct grammer.
2)Be focased!
3)Use CUPS.
4)Use proper sentence structure.
5)Have an interesting beginning.
6)Show how you got your awnsers on the first part.

Tremina

2/28/2011 08:56:25 am

1.Use CUPS
2.Take your time
3.Make sure your story fits the writing prompt
4.EXPLODE THE MOMENT!!
5.Entertaining Beginning

GOOD LUCK EVERYONE (INCLUDONG ME)

(^_^)

Tremina

2/28/2011 08:57:51 am

I meant to sya including.

Tremina

2/28/2011 08:58:25 am

I meant say.

m@r!tz@

2/28/2011 10:06:39 am

ROCK IT

taylor

2/28/2011 10:20:17 am

Use cups.explode the moment.check your work.Use unwrap.Get a good grade.

Jordan

2/28/2011 10:37:48 am

Awesome power-point! It filled me with POWER!!!

Camryn (Jordans sister)

2/28/2011 10:39:26 am

I know you can do it!!

Jadore monroe

2/28/2011 10:39:48 am

Make sure you revise and edit. Read back over yout story. ALWAYS MAKE YOUR P-U-N-C-T-U-A-T-I-O-N. Make sure you your C-U-P-S. ROCK THE TAKS.

Adan

2/28/2011 10:58:30 am

5 strategies u can use are cups,
have 5 complete paragraphs,
have a great explode moment,
revise and edit your work,and last but not least,
take your time wisely.

leo123

2/28/2011 11:20:18 am

use cups,expode the moment,correct grammar,5 paragraphs,revise and edit.

Gissel

2/28/2011 11:24:17 am

We can bet the taks if we all believe we can.

Ladeja

2/28/2011 09:51:50 pm

As long as we stay focused we will rock this test!

Mykala Elder

3/1/2011 07:52:35 am

I know that I got a four on my story and got all of my guestions on my test right.You need to think positive thoughts and if you do that you can do anything. I believe in all of you and I think we are going to have Mrs.Andega do something absoulutely humiliating.And guess what I know that the whole class will get commended.JUST BELIEVE IN YOURSELF!!!!!

Antoine

3/1/2011 08:17:35 am

The T.A.K.S. is easier than you think, so HIT ME WITH A 4 EVERYONE! If you agree, say, "oh yeah!" once i get to school.

Kennedy

3/1/2011 09:02:56 am

Underline important iformation,capitlization,grammer,spelling punctiuation, and atleast 5 paragraphs. Make sure the writing fits in the write prop. When your at the end of your story always wrap it up to the begining.

DAISY

3/1/2011 09:13:42 am

i used all the strategies. i hope everybody pass.:)!

Khadijah

3/1/2011 08:51:44 pm

I used all the strategies I'm sure to pass!

jeanne

3/2/2011 08:07:13 am

hopefully everybody used all the stradgies and read it over. now Mrs.Andega has to die her hair terquoist

saleen

3/3/2011 04:55:08 am

1.UNWRAP
2.CUPS
3.DON'TRUS

Antoine

3/3/2011 07:48:57 am

1. CUPS
2. follow directions
3. GET COMMENDED
4. UNWRAP
5. Be creative with your story!

Henry

3/3/2011 08:20:26 am

use cups and explode the moment

briana

3/4/2011 02:25:25 am

i will get a 4 or more

Khadijah

3/4/2011 02:30:20 am

1.Cups
2.follow directions
3.Unwrap
4.Do your best!!!

Devani Gamboa

3/4/2011 02:34:44 am

here are some tips to use in the writing taks
1.CUPS
2. EXPLODE THE MOMENT
3.DO YOUR BEST.
4.UNWRAP
5.FOLLOW DIRECTIONS

pastor

3/4/2011 02:35:30 am

1.FOLLOW DIRECTIONS
2.USE CUPS
3.USE EXPLODE THE MOMENT
4.USE UNWRAP
5.TRY YOUR BEST!!!

Ayo O. link

3/4/2011 03:37:09 am

Taks was so easy and to think i was scared at first.

C: Capitolize
U: Use correct grammer
P: Punctation
S: Spelling

Mykala E.!!

3/4/2011 06:57:46 am

I know that I got a four and that I got all of my questions right. And here is a secret if you believe in yourself and you know that people believe in you too you can achieve anything.I think we are going to make Mrs.Andega do something crazy I believe in you guys Mrs.Andega is also going to be so proud and mad if she has to do something absoulutely humiliating!!!!!

briana

3/5/2011 12:10:06 am

1. use cups
2.read carefully so you dont miss any mistakes
3.use correct grammer
4.work hard

5.take your time

Morris

3/6/2011 08:36:31 am

Strategies for the Writing Test...

1. Always use CUPS.
2. Underline important information.
3. Explode the moment.
4. Let the reader know how you feel.
5. Make the reader feel like they are right there with you.

Morris

3/6/2011 08:51:43 am

hopefully everybody got a 4.hay richard what does pirate mean?

Braelyn

3/7/2011 06:48:24 am

Yeah what does PIRATE mean?

Khadijah

3/7/2011 09:38:41 am

The 4b Armadillos are so talented. They can achieve anything they set their minds to. They have the power to change their future and make it better. All they need to do is beleive in themselves and they are on their way to a life of success. I believe in them!! We all need to BELEIVE!!!!

Khadijah

3/7/2011 09:40:33 am

I mean we all need to BELIEVE!!!!

m@r!tz@ link

3/7/2011 10:27:08 am

HOPE YOU ALL PAST PSSSSSSST...Mrs.Andega said she's gonna die her hair torquise WHEN! we pass,not IF we pass because we all did :)

Richard

3/7/2011 10:45:29 pm

PIRATE means Predict,Indicate,Read,Attack,T just means answer the quistion and E means check back

m@r!tz@

3/8/2011 12:07:25 pm

did you talk to the taks test,and said,"I CAN BEAT YOU!"? Well that's what you should have done:}

m@r!tz@

3/8/2011 12:08:23 pm

I mean TAKS

4/3/2011 01:42:40 pm

Test

moises ramirez link

4/29/2011 09:12:21 am

Moises Ramirez link

4/29/2011 09:14:38 am

sorry i messed up. Well i'm glad slaide that taks test i felt like a pro

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